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You are the exception
To my every rule,
And I wonder if that makes me
A certified fool.
I opened myself,
And I gave her to you -
I have nothing more to give.

In fear and arousal
You fill my soul.
When lonely and aching
Your touch makes me whole.
For each of your moods
I have a matching role -
I have nothing more to give.

When others say can't,
I simply say until.
When I tell others I won't,
You know, for you, I will.
I'm the empty vessel
Waiting to be filled -
I have nothing more to give.

Take me in your hands,
Make me ache for your commands,
There is nothing you demand
I wouldn't offer up to you.
Shape me as you want me
Hide me, share me, flaunt me,
Praise me, love me, taunt me -
I am there for you to use.

Yours, always,
~denera
Feb 26, 2004
©2004-2009 ~elorin
:iconelorin:

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from a slave to her Master
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bondage? :D ..well written!!

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Pointed criticism, if accurate, often gives the artist an inner sense of relief. The criticism that damages is that which disparages, dismisses, ridicules, or condemns. Founder:~darksanctuary
:iconelorin:
Bondage absolutely...~smiles softly~ Thank you...I think the scansion needs improvement but it was an inspired work. I haven't been here in a while...should probably key in some more of my works.

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Ms. Elorin ~The Arctic Bitch~
Frigid Fire Her Frigid Bitchness
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great work...its really unique and great description...its powerful to me!

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Darkness is within me...
And yet here i am...
In love...
And all the shit I didnt even know was coming with it...
I easily say its worth it,
the problem is that its not just my life that hangs on this...

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